I can't show you the cartoons we started last week as I haven't had all the permission slips in from parents to say I can share their children's work, so instead here's an idea for a straightforward narrative that went down well with another group I teach.
I gave them the opening below and then asked them:
- what kind of personality does the hamster have? Is it mischievous, domineering, sneaky, plain evil?
- how does Maggie react? Is she scared, delighted, stunned?
- what does the hamster have to say to her?
- is she going to share this news with anyone?
- what kind of adventures could you have if you owned a talking pet?
We discussed possible scenarios such as taking the hamster to school, using it to spy on people or to burgle houses, entering it for a talent show.
Next week I shall give them little books and a sheet of hamster pictures taken from the internet to cut out for illustrations, and they can make their own complete stories.
***
The bedside
clock said midnight but Maggie couldn’t sleep. She was too excited.
Over in the
corner of the room sat a brand new hamster cage, and inside it, a brand new
hamster. She’d gone with her mum earlier that day to choose him: a
coffee-coloured ball of fluff with a pink nose and neat white paws. ‘I’m going
to call him Podge,’ Maggie had said as the shopkeeper scooped him out of the
tank and popped him into a little cardboard box. She was shaking with
excitement as they drove home.
And all day
she’d been waiting for him to come out and play.
‘Leave him
be for a few hours,’ her mum had urged. ‘He’ll be frightened. He’ll need time
to get used to his new home.’
So Maggie
had sat impatiently, unable to concentrate on anything else because she kept
glancing over at the cage and hoping Podge would show.
Now, at
last, it sounded as if the hamster might be awake. She sat bolt upright and
began to push back the duvet eagerly.
‘Hey!’ came
a piping voice from the corner. ‘You! Come over here.’
Maggie
stared. By the faint light coming through from the landing she could see that Podge
had indeed come out. More than that: he was standing up on his hind legs and
stretching a stern, skinny paw through
the cage, as if to beckon her.
‘Yes, you,’
repeated the hamster. ‘Big human. Come here. I’ve got something important to
tell you.’
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